Advanced Typography - TASK 2

13/9/2023 - 11/10/2023 (Week 3 - Week 7)
Katelyn Tan Kye Ling (0354148)
Bachelor Of Design In Creative Media (Advanced Typography)
TASK 2 - Key Artwork


LECTURES

Lecture notes 1-3 are here: Advanced Typography - Exercises

WEEK 4 - Lecture 4 (20/9/2023)
In today's class Mr. Vinod started off by giving a talk about our specialisations. He talked mostly about graphic design. Next, he asked us all to display our posters on our computers and asked everyone to walk around and take a look. He then went into the feedbacks sessions for our key artwork sketches.


INSTRUCTION

TASK 2: Key Artwork
For this task, we are to create a key artwork using our own name or pseudonym. We are to explore and compose as many permutations and combinations of your name in the form of a wordmark/lettering. The final key artwork must be an elegant solution, well balanced and composed, not complicated or confusing that leads to a functional and communicable key artwork. This key artwork will subsequently be used in Task 2(B) collateral. 

SKETCH:
In my first sketch I decided to use my dog's name(Luna) to create the key artwork. Luna sounds like the word lunar which means moon therefore I made a few designs related to the moon. (All sketches were drawn on Procreate.)
Fig. 2.1 Sketch 1 (18/9/2023)

After feedback from Mr. Vinod, I decided to scrap off some of the sketches and added new ones.
Meaning of wordmark: There's only one moon and one kind of my dog on earth which is why she is so special to me. The moon is associated with the word beauty and I also believe that my dog is really beautiful. Furthermore I want to empower others and help them be more confident. (All sketches were drawn on Procreate.)
Fig. 2.2 Sketch 2 (23/9/2023)

DIGITALISATION:
I digitalised 2 wordmarks on illustrator because I couldn't decided between them, but Mr. Vinod said he liked the second one and it's much more interesting.
Fig. 2.3 Digitalised Wordmark #1
Fig. 2.4 Digitalised Wordmark #2

Chosen Wordmark:
Fig. 2.5 Week 5 Chosen Wordmark (Week 5 - 27/9/2023)

Refined Wordmark:
After feedback, I made the moon into a full moon but left the word as a crescent shape. 
Fig. 2.6 Refined Wordmark #1 (Week 5 - 27/9/2023)

After a second round of feedback, I added texture to the moon to cancel out the blank black areas.
Fig. 2.7 Refined Wordmark #2 (Week 5 - 28/9/2023)

Final Wordmark:
In week 6 when I showed my collaterals, Mr. Vinod said that the lines on the wordmark were placed awkwardly and spacing is too neat. So I finalised it once more.
Fig. 2.8 Final Wordmark (Week 6 - 4/10/2023)

COLLATERAL:
WEEK 5 PROGRESS:
I chose this colour palette for my brand's identity. 
Fig. 3.1 Brand's Colour Palette


Fig. 3.2 Brand Collateral (Week 5 - 31/9/2023)


Fig. 3.3 Brand Collateral (Week 5 - 1/10/2023)


Fig. 3.4 Brand Collateral (Week 5 - 1/10/2023)

WEEK 6 PROGRESS:
I had to do everything all over again because I redid my wordmark and also didn't do a good job on the collaterals. I had to expand my identity as well and make it more unique and interesting.
Fig. 3.5 New Colour Palette (10/4/2023)
New & Refined Collaterals:
Fig. 3.6 New Key Artwork with colours

Fig. 3.7 Tote Bag (4/10/2023)

Fig. 3.8 Coffee Cup (5/10/2023)

Fig. 3.9 Card (7/10/2023)

Fig. 3.10 Brand Collateral (9/10/2023)

WORDMARK ANIMATION:
I used after effects for the animation.
Fig. 4.1 Wordmark Animation (9/10/2023)

INSTAGRAM PAGE:
In my Instagram's page, I wanted to include my colour palette and also include the main keywords which my brand represents and the message it wants to carry out. I included quotes, as well as the face of the brand which is my dog.

Fig. 5.1 1st attempt (9/10/2023)

After feedback from Mr. Vinod, I switched up some things and also thought about what could be put for the second picture in some posts. (Empty box is for the wordmark animation)

Fig. 5.2 Final Layout (11/10/2023)

FINAL TASK 2 SUBMISSION:
1. Key Artwork
B&W:
Fig. 6.1 B&W Wordmark

Colour:
Fig. 6.2 Coloured Version

2. Key Artwork Animation:
Fig. 6.2 GIF Animation
3. Final Key Artwork:
Colour Palette:
Fig. 6.3 Colour Palette

Fig. 6.4 Coloured Key Artwork
Collaterals: (1024x1024)
Fig. 6.5 Tote Bag

Fig. 6.6 Coffee Cup

Fig. 6.7 Card

Fig. 6.8 Brand Collateral

4. Instagram page:
IG Handle: @luun._.aa

5. Screengrab of IG page:
Fig. 6.9 Ig Page Screen Grab

PDF of the image covers of each post from first post at the bottom of the IG page and last post at the top of the IG page.
(Excluding animation)
Fig. 6.10 PDF IG Page

FEEDBACK
Week 4: TASK 2 (Key Artwork)
General Feedback: Some of these don't work. Should have more meaning in the designs.
Specific Feedback: Each of the design should have a selling point and has to make sense, I have to describe what others cannot see in the design in order to "sell" well. I cannot just try to "sell" an artwork just because of it visuals. Create artworks with a story/meaning behind it.

Week 5: TASK 2 (Key Artwork)
General Feedback: Second wordmark is much more interesting but needs some refining done to it.
Specific Feedback: Can extend the black background of the moon to a round shape. The black outline between and around the words have to be balanced. Can add texture to the black part of the moon.

Week 6: TASK 2 (Key Artwork)
General Feedback: Colour contrast, expand more. 
Specific Feedback: The colour of some of the wordmarks are ok, however some don't have good contrast. Can add white outlines if background is black as it won't work on dark backgrounds. Don't just "slap" the wordmark on top of the item, expand it, make it an identity (can add texture).

Week 7: TASK 2 (Key Artwork - IG Page)
General Feedback: Overall is ok, colour scheme is nice. Nice patterns made for the pictures. However, few things can be altered and can be made better.
Specific Feedback: Don't cover your face, that particular post needs more work. Can try to show a sneak peak of each of the brand collaterals instead of a whole picture, then reveal the whole thing in the next picture. Also think of the next pictures after the main picture for each post to show more meaning of it and to make it more interesting. 

RELFECTION
Experience
This task was a bit challenging for me as we had to come up with a meaning behind the artwork and also had to sell it. It was my first time designing something like a logo so it took me quite sometime to come up with ideas. However after some thought and time put into sketching it, I got an idea of what I could do. Throughout the digitalisation part, I struggled as well but with the help and feedback from Mr. Vinod, I was able to pull through it. Overall, this experience was pretty fun and a new one for me.

Observation
It is very clear after this task that colour contrast it extremely important. Both or multiple colours should compliment each other without clashing or not being able to see when background is there. I also learned that a logo should work on both white and black background for it to be "good to go". Lastly, I also learned that placement of different elements is extremely important as well, be it a stroke or a letter.

Findings
I find myself looking at different logos more differently now, like how it was designed, why it was made this way etc. I start to appreciate logos more as I know that the process takes many weeks, from sketching to digitalisation as well as it getting rejected many times before succeeding. Creating a single logo/wordmark takes lots of time and effort. 

FURTHER READING

Fig. 7.1 Visual Research (An Introduction to Research Methodologies In Graphic Design)

Visual Research (Pg 94, 96, 97)
A designer needs to understand the context within which the work is to be placed. This means that the range of materials already in existence within that context, the expectations of the target audience and the existing messages against which the work may be required to compete all need to be taken into account. 

Traditionally, design education has worked with contextual visual research at the level of materials gathering and the construction of 'mood boards' – rough layouts of a range of objects which relate to the message, giving an impression of the kind of 'feel' intended by the designer at the outset of the project.

Example:
Fig. 7.2 Rolex Logo

Fig. 7.3 Burger King Logo

Above shown are 2 logos, Rolex and Burger King. The two logos (signs) featured here employ the same associations but are at different ends of the value system in most western societies. 
Rolex, in a visual manner through the use of the crown, and Burger King, in its title (the signifier), make reference to royalty and monarchs. The signified at work here is the association we might make with luxury and status.


For the designer to establish a clear set of intentions for an individual project and a critical position, relative to the subject being explored, so as to be able to reflect on progress made and to test the resulting graphic messages against a set of stated criteria – in effect, replacing the client’s brief with one of the designer’s own creation. The resultant design propositions are then both a combination of the personal exploration of the subject and a nascent visual language that operates within a set of predetermined objectives.

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